Registered: 07/20/99
Posts: 3650
Loc: New York NY USA
Brent,
Great work! Beautifully played and implemented ideas.
Speaking subjectively I think that there's maybe a few too many bells and whistles now. I find myself distracted from the "song" by all the new parts and I think that some of the original intimacy of the piece is now gone. There's so many great ideas you came up with! I'd just pare it down a bit from here and let it breathe a little.