I guess my mix shows that I agree with Jeremy about the song being too long, however I do feel there are some other problems with it. The reason I like Brents mix so well is that he gave the song more structure. The verse is separated from the chorus sonicly by the addition of harmonies, the electric gtr and piano are slightly rearranged and the band-limited vocal all contribute to defining the sections. This makes for a more varied, livly and intresting listening experience IMHO.
Any one feeling slighted because they think their mix sounds better than someone elses should chill a bit. There are LOTS of ways to define a good mix (what do you call a poorly mixed hit?)and this is just for fun after all.

Cheers,
Peter