Jeff -

Bravo! Nice job! I have bolded your name along with Brent's in the contest to indicate both of you are leading the pack right now. Your mix, like Brents, indicates a lot of careful listening and editing work. Here are my comments...

-nice autotuning work on the vocal
-nice new drum track but perhaps a bit low in the mix, what drum plugin/program did you use?
-nice editing, I particularly like how you re-arranged the part with the lead guitar
-nice background vocal, what program did you use?
-bass seems a little low level in the mix
-eq/comp/reverb on vocal sounds nice
-nice organ work although the very end of the song sounds like you lost steam and just wanted to finish up quickly
- I like the way the guitar is mixed and that you used delay on it
-acoustic guitar sounds nice in this mix
-what happened to the piano? Did you cut it on purpose?

Overall, you're a contender along with Brent's mix. Please comment more on what you did, what gear you used etc. here in this thread.