Cool. My comments are...

- chorus on acoustic guitar and piano too phasey sounding but an interesting idea, maybe just too much
- reverb on the drums gives the song a different feel, sounds a bit overcompressed
- nice job pulling out the snare, sounds like it has more buzz
- vocal sits ok in the mix
- bass sits ok in the mix
- lead guitar sounds wimpy and a bit out of place not in the same "room" as the rest of the track

A good mix thanks for taking the time. Oh and please comment on what you did and why you did it, that's at least half the fun of this contest.