fronk10 -

Thanks for joining our contest... my comments are...

-B3 organ sounds cool, but the part sounds more like a jam, I like the way it picks up at the end, that could have been used as a nice climb to the chorus parts or maybe in the outro.
-the mix sounds balanced overall
-the reverb choice on the vocal sounds a bit odd
-nice job, you get points for creativity

Please feel free to elaborate on what you did and why. Sounds to me like you had fun with it!