EWF - I didn't get a file from you in my email. To post it here - all you have to do is hit Reply (not Quick Reply) then use the blue File Manager link to attached the MP3 file to your reply.
Jeremy - I must say I'm suprised - I don't mean to hurt your feelings, but it didn't sound good. The vocal tuning was all over the place. Bass and acoustic guitar were too loud. The drums were panned weird. The levels were low. Do you always make your MP3s at 128kbps? This is fine I guess but I generally prefer 192kbps. Oh well.
Here's my mix which I think is better but certainly has flaws we can talk about:
FarFromHome.mp3